Merge pull request 'Fix em-dash examples in checklist + strip frequency persuasion' (#12 ) from llm-prose-tells-v10 into main

Reviewed-on: #12
use actual em-dashes in checklist examples
2026-03-05 00:20:32 +01:00 · 2026-03-04 15:19:25 -08:00 · 2026-03-05 00:13:49 +01:00
1 changed files with 3 additions and 3 deletions
--- a/prompts/LLM_PROSE_TELLS.md
+++ b/prompts/LLM_PROSE_TELLS.md
@@ -307,9 +307,9 @@ introduces another.

 ### Pass 2: Sentence-Level Restructuring

-10. Find every em-dash pivot ("not X...but Y," "not just X...Y," "more than
-    X...Y") and rewrite it as two separate clauses or a single sentence that
-    makes the point without the negation-then-correction structure.
+10. Find every em-dash pivot ("not X—but Y," "not just X—Y," "more than X—Y")
+    and rewrite it as two separate clauses or a single sentence that makes the
+    point without the negation-then-correction structure.

 11. Find every colon elaboration and check whether it's doing real work. If the
    clause before the colon could be deleted without losing meaning, rewrite the
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Jeffrey Paul	3ce000178f	Merge pull request 'LLM prose tells: merge adjacent sentences, add checklist items' (#11 ) from llm-prose-tells-merge-pass into main All checks were successful check / check (push) Successful in 12s Details Reviewed-on: #11	2026-03-05 00:13:49 +01:00