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### Pass 2: Sentence-Level Restructuring
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10. Find every em-dash pivot ("not X...but Y," "not just X...Y," "more than
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X...Y") and rewrite it as two separate clauses or a single sentence that
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makes the point without the negation-then-correction structure.
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10. Find every em-dash pivot ("not X—but Y," "not just X—Y," "more than X—Y")
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and rewrite it as two separate clauses or a single sentence that makes the
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point without the negation-then-correction structure.
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11. Find every colon elaboration and check whether it's doing real work. If the
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clause before the colon could be deleted without losing meaning, rewrite the
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@@ -443,12 +443,6 @@ roughly like this:
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> **model:** _(rewrites entire document without em-dashes while describing
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> em-dash overuse)_
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> **human:** this whole document seems to be making the case for FREQUENCY of
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> use being important. we don't care about frequency, remove all that
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> persuasion.
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> **model:** _(strips out every "humans do this too but less often" comparison)_
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The human compared this process to the deleted scene in Terminator 2 where John
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Connor switches the T-800's CPU to learning mode. The model compared it to a
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