Fix em-dash examples in checklist + strip frequency persuasion #12

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sneak merged 1 commits from llm-prose-tells-v10 into main 2026-03-05 00:20:32 +01:00

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@@ -307,9 +307,9 @@ introduces another.
### Pass 2: Sentence-Level Restructuring ### Pass 2: Sentence-Level Restructuring
10. Find every em-dash pivot ("not X...but Y," "not just X...Y," "more than 10. Find every em-dash pivot ("not Xbut Y," "not just XY," "more than X—Y")
X...Y") and rewrite it as two separate clauses or a single sentence that and rewrite it as two separate clauses or a single sentence that makes the
makes the point without the negation-then-correction structure. point without the negation-then-correction structure.
11. Find every colon elaboration and check whether it's doing real work. If the 11. Find every colon elaboration and check whether it's doing real work. If the
clause before the colon could be deleted without losing meaning, rewrite the clause before the colon could be deleted without losing meaning, rewrite the