Fix em-dash examples in checklist + strip frequency persuasion #12

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### Pass 2: Sentence-Level Restructuring
10. Find every em-dash pivot ("not X...but Y," "not just X...Y," "more than
X...Y") and rewrite it as two separate clauses or a single sentence that
makes the point without the negation-then-correction structure.
10. Find every em-dash pivot ("not Xbut Y," "not just XY," "more than X—Y")
and rewrite it as two separate clauses or a single sentence that makes the
point without the negation-then-correction structure.
11. Find every colon elaboration and check whether it's doing real work. If the
clause before the colon could be deleted without losing meaning, rewrite the