LLM prose tells: merge adjacent sentences, add checklist items #11

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the same thing twice from two directions, delete the contrast. the same thing twice from two directions, delete the contrast.
15. Check for the two-clause compound sentence pattern. If most sentences in a 15. Check for the two-clause compound sentence pattern. If most sentences in a
passage follow the "\[clause\], \[conjunction\] \[clause\]" structure, passage follow the "\[clause\], \[conjunction\] \[clause\]" structure, first
rewrite some of them. Break a few into two sentences. Start some with a try removing the conjunction and second clause entirely, since it's often
subordinate clause. Embed a relative clause in the middle of one instead of redundant or unnecessary. If the second clause does carry meaning, break it
appending it at the end. into its own sentence, start the sentence with a subordinate clause, or
embed a relative clause in the middle instead of appending it at the end.
16. Find every rhetorical question that is immediately followed by its own 16. Find every rhetorical question that is immediately followed by its own
answer and rewrite the passage as a direct statement. answer and rewrite the passage as a direct statement.