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 ### The Dramatic Fragment
 
 Sentence fragments used as standalone paragraphs for emphasis, like "Full stop."
-or "Let that sink in." on their own line. One of these in an entire essay is a
-stylistic choice. One per section is a tic.
+or "Let that sink in." on their own line. Using one in an entire essay is a
+reasonable stylistic choice, but models drop them in once per section or more,
+at which point it stops being deliberate and becomes a habit.
 
 ### The Pivot Paragraph