diff --git a/prompts/LLM_PROSE_TELLS.md b/prompts/LLM_PROSE_TELLS.md index 9b482ed..acca82f 100644 --- a/prompts/LLM_PROSE_TELLS.md +++ b/prompts/LLM_PROSE_TELLS.md @@ -307,9 +307,9 @@ introduces another. ### Pass 2: Sentence-Level Restructuring -10. Find every em-dash pivot ("not X...but Y," "not just X...Y," "more than - X...Y") and rewrite it as two separate clauses or a single sentence that - makes the point without the negation-then-correction structure. +10. Find every em-dash pivot ("not X—but Y," "not just X—Y," "more than X—Y") + and rewrite it as two separate clauses or a single sentence that makes the + point without the negation-then-correction structure. 11. Find every colon elaboration and check whether it's doing real work. If the clause before the colon could be deleted without losing meaning, rewrite the