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@@ -123,9 +123,9 @@ still says everything it needs to, the contrast was filler.
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Models keep going after the sentence has already made its point, tacking on
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clarifying phrases, adverbial modifiers, or restatements that add nothing.
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> "A person might lean on one or two of these habits across an essay, but LLM
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> output will use fifteen of them per paragraph, consistently, throughout the
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> entire piece."
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> "A person might lean on one or two of these habits across an entire essay, but
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> LLM output will use fifteen of them per paragraph, consistently, throughout
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> the entire piece."
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This sentence could end at "paragraph." The words after it just repeat what "per
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paragraph" already means. Models do this because they're optimizing for clarity
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@@ -493,9 +493,9 @@ roughly like this:
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> **human:** the dramatic fragment paragraph has a tell in it
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> **model:** "One of these in an essay is a stylistic choice. One per section is
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> a tic." Two-clause parallel structure with the same shape, and also a staccato
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> pair.
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> **model:** "One of these in an entire essay is a stylistic choice. One per
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> section is a tic." Two-clause parallel structure with the same shape, and also
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> a staccato pair.
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>
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> **human:** add em dashes generally as a tell, and remove them all from the
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> tells doc
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