restore example quotes
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@@ -123,9 +123,9 @@ still says everything it needs to, the contrast was filler.
Models keep going after the sentence has already made its point, tacking on Models keep going after the sentence has already made its point, tacking on
clarifying phrases, adverbial modifiers, or restatements that add nothing. clarifying phrases, adverbial modifiers, or restatements that add nothing.
> "A person might lean on one or two of these habits across an essay, but LLM > "A person might lean on one or two of these habits across an entire essay, but
> output will use fifteen of them per paragraph, consistently, throughout the > LLM output will use fifteen of them per paragraph, consistently, throughout
> entire piece." > the entire piece."
This sentence could end at "paragraph." The words after it just repeat what "per This sentence could end at "paragraph." The words after it just repeat what "per
paragraph" already means. Models do this because they're optimizing for clarity paragraph" already means. Models do this because they're optimizing for clarity
@@ -493,9 +493,9 @@ roughly like this:
> >
> **human:** the dramatic fragment paragraph has a tell in it > **human:** the dramatic fragment paragraph has a tell in it
> >
> **model:** "One of these in an essay is a stylistic choice. One per section is > **model:** "One of these in an entire essay is a stylistic choice. One per
> a tic." Two-clause parallel structure with the same shape, and also a staccato > section is a tic." Two-clause parallel structure with the same shape, and also
> pair. > a staccato pair.
> >
> **human:** add em dashes generally as a tell, and remove them all from the > **human:** add em dashes generally as a tell, and remove them all from the
> tells doc > tells doc