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@ -22,12 +22,16 @@ and unambiguously expresses LACK OF CONSENT by a user of that software to
* usage reporting, anonymous or not * usage reporting, anonymous or not
* automatic update phone-home * automatic update phone-home
* crash reporting * crash reporting
* non-essential-to-functionality requests of *any kind* to the creator of * *non-essential-to-functionality* requests of *any kind* to the creator of
the software or other cloud or tracking services the software or other *tracking services*
We just want local software, and by providing it to us you are not entitled We just want local software, and by providing it to us you are not entitled
to our usage, our crashes, or our IP addresses. to our usage, our crashes, or our IP addresses.
Remember: in the right hands, an IP address is a *physical location*. If
you would not collect your users' GPS coordinates against their wishes, you
should not be collecting their IP addresses against their wishes!
Authors, do the *ethical thing* and respect the following environment Authors, do the *ethical thing* and respect the following environment
variable in your software and your *limited rights to the computers of your variable in your software and your *limited rights to the computers of your
users*: users*: